Hit Songwriting: “Say You Do” – Dierks Bentley

Recording artist Dierks Bentley

“Say You Do” recorded by Dierks Bentley definitely plays fast and loose with a few songwriting rules. In spite of that (or because of it), Dierks Bentley made it to #1 on the Country airplay charts and stayed for a fair amount of time. Even though the melody and lyrics of this song have a decidedly unique slant, it still appeals to radio’s demanding listeners. So if you’re just dying to be a song crafting rebel, check out how these writers did it.

Hit Song Guide: “Highway Don’t Care” – Tim McGraw

Country superstar Tim McGraw.

“Highway Don’t Care” is a great example of Contemporary Country songwriting. The lyric paints a vibrant, detailed picture of the characters and situation, offering an original approach to a familiar theme. And even though we all know “lyrics are king” in Country music, the melody played an equally important role in sending this song to the No. 1 spot on the music charts.

“Highway Don’t Care” – Tim McGraw

Songwriters: Mark Irwin, Joshua Kear, Brad Warren, Brett Warren

TECHNIQUES TO HEAR AND TRY

  • Engage your listener with your opening line.      
  • Use images to express emotion.
  • Make your melody memorable with repetition and variation.
  • Learn to use your demo production “ears.”

Hit Songwriting: “The Bones” by Maren Morris

As a songwriter in Nashville, Maren Morris has always expressed what was on her mind and never pulled punches. Her demand for honesty from other women in “Drunk Girls Don’t Cry” is forthright and refreshing. An edgy sense of humor and fresh Hip Hop-style rhymes light up the lyrics of “Rich.” And she successfully combines elements of the Rock and Blues genres in songs like “My Church” and ‘I Wish I Was.”

So it shouldn’t have come as a total surprise when Maren agreed to lend the power of her voice and attitude to Pop/Dance smash “The Middle,” helping to make that song a #1 Pop smash. Now here she is back in the Country genre with another big hit single.

 “The Bones” – Maren Morris

Songwriters: Maren Morris, Jimmy Robbins, Laura Veltz

TECHNIQUES TO HEAR AND TRY: 

  • Give your singer plenty of character in the lyric. 
  • Add a fresh twist to a familiar lyric phrase or cliché. 
  • Change the beat emphasis in your melody to get attention.
  • Use a different phrase length in each song section.

Write a NEW Holiday Classic

While the sights and sounds of the season are all around us, this is the time to write those holiday hits. Maybe you want to pitch to a Hallmark holiday special, approach a music publisher with a new Christmas classic, or just share a bit of seasonal cheer with friends and family.

If you’re like me, you’ve combed through YouTube looking for cool songs and videos to share in holiday emails. Don’t miss out on these listeners! Put a simple lyric video together and upload it to YouTube, Facebook, or Instagram.

 YOUTUBE: “BY CHRISTMAS EVE” – JOHN LEGEND

There have been a few Christmas lyrics about getting home in time to celebrate with family and friends. There’s the classic “I’ll Be Home for Christmas” and songs like Chris Rea’s “Driving Home for Christmas,” but it’s a theme that still has plenty of room for creativity.

In this song, writers John Legend, Amy Wadge, and Daniel Lafrombe have given it a personal touch that makes you feel you’re listening in as Legend calls home to say he’ll be late.

In the chorus he lists all the things he might do to make it back by Christmas Eve: “I’m gonna walk, if I have to run, I’ll stand on the highway and stop someone. I’ll cross the deserts and oceans, a river that’s frozen…” Give this idea some thought: If you were stuck a thousand miles away, how would you try to make it back home in time for the holiday?

A NOTE ON THE MELODY: This is a slow ballad with a strong melody. There are a few pauses between song sections (and one pause in the chorus after “You can count on me”) but the rest of the melody rolls forward line after line, creating plenty of momentum. That’s one of the essential tricks of good ballad writing—the melody is always in motion. Also notice the pattern of long and short phrases that keep the melody interesting… and keep listeners listening.

 YOUTUBE: “MAKE IT TO CHRISTMAS” – ALESSIA CARA

I got a real kick out of this lyric! Although the title sounds like another “make it back home in time” song, it’s definitely not! Here, the question is: Will the singer and her boyfriend stay together until the big day? She says:”Don’t know what I’ll say to Dad when he sees the empty chair. Don’t want to hear my Mom say, “Told you so.” Listeners will stay tuned in to find out how it all turns out. 

There are lots of Motown overtones in the arrangement that add a nostalgic flavor. In a holiday song, a little nostalgia is a good thing.The melody rolls forward without stopping, carrying listeners along. There’s a strong post-chorus filled with retro-Pop background vocals and a solid hook/title line.


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Write about your fav place for the holidays

 YOUTUBE: “IT’S CHRISTMAS TIME IN TEXAS” – LOS LOBOS

Check out this revamping of Freddy Fender’s Tex-Mex classic complete with pumping bass and accordion frills that evoke the genre and locale. How about taking your Christmas song to someplace like Paris? Try a sidewalk café vibe or Edith Piaf-style chanson. (Now there’s a thought!)

Choose your favorite spot and imagine a holiday with local color and sound. This might limit your film and TV pitches to scenes that take place in that particular locale, but it could be a great YouTube lyric video with a few stock photos. YouTubers will love your new holiday classic.

YOUTUBE:  CHRISTMAS VIBEZ – NE-YO ft. SATORI

This is an Urban AC tune with a cool Reggae vibe and plenty of warm Jamaican holiday wishes. The lyric is simple but keeps the Jamaican feel throughout—”Though we celebrate it different where I’m from / Joy we keep it strong.” The melody is catchy, with just the right amount of syncopation to get your body swaying. 

Focus on a single icon of the holidays

YOUTUBE: “THIS CANDLE TIME OF YEAR – SAMANTHA JADE”

In this lyric, writers Samantha Jade and Graeme Press chose a single object to represent the holiday season—a candle—and built their lyric around it. You can hear something similar in holiday classics lilke “Silver Bells” and “White Christmas.”

Instead of listing all the familiar sights and sounds of the holidays, choose just one and explore it.BONUS TIP: You can apply this idea to any holiday, from New Year’s to Hallowe’en. Choose one image and write a lyric around it, focusing on the feelings and meaning associated with it.

Choose a holiday emotion

YOUTUBE: “FINALLY IT’S CHRISTMAS” – HANSON

What kid hasn’t shouted “Finally!!! It’s Christmas!” as they rushed to the tree to tear open their presents? This song, written and performed by the Hanson brothers in 2017, is a wonderful rockin’ tribute to the excitement and anticipation in the build-up to the Big Holiday. I loved it for the fun and enthusiasm of the song, the performance, and the musical arrangement with it’s big nod to the Beach Boys and the Beatles. Check out the YouTube video just for the joy of it.

Writing holiday lyrics

The best way to get authenticity and emotion into your lyric is to put yourself into the situation you’re writing about. That’s why writing your holiday songs at this time of year is such a good idea.As you go through the holidays, be aware of your own emotions and those of the people around you. Or pick a stranger at random and imagine that person’s situation and what they’re feeling. Or watch a classic holiday movie and choose a scene that suggests a song idea.

Draw the listener into the situation with a lyric that features images, actions, and physical sensations. Express the emotion the singer is feeling in ways the listener can relate to. Use the physical senses to evoke sound, touch, smell, and taste. You’ll give your song a unique, believable vibe and guarantee that it won’t be just another holiday song by rote.

Try it now

Start, work on, rewrite, or finish a holiday song. You can write in just about any style from Contemporary Pop to Singer-Songwriter ballad to Reggae to 1950s Rock ‘n’ Roll. Choose a style that plays to your strengths. A simple guitar/vocal works great for the Singer-Songwriter, Folk, Reggae, and Americana styles. A piano/vocal is fine for Adult Contemporary ballads. You’ll need a more produced track for some of the Rock and orchestral styles.

If you don’t consider yourself the right singer for the song, call on a friend, a fellow songwriter, or someone in your family. Holiday songs are not about being polished and perfect; they’re all about a real feeling. Keep that in your mind and heart and you’ll do fine!

READ MORE:  Contemporary Holiday Hits

Hit Songwriting: “All On Me” – Devin Dawson

“All On Me” is the breakthrough debut single for Country artist Devin Dawson. It zoomed up to #2 on the Nielsen Radio charts, topping 19 million views on YouTube and 95 million listens on Spotify (and still climbing). A remarkable achievement for a single by a brand new artist.

I love digging into songs that propel a brand new artist up the charts. Those artists don’t have a billion fans breathlessly waiting for their next release, guaranteeing it shoots like a rocket straight into the Top Ten. Nope. Their releases have to make it on the strength of the song and performance. It takes an exceptional song with a lot of appeal to make that happen and that’s what makes these songs so much fun to pull apart.

SONG GUIDE

“All On Me” – Devin Dawson

Writers:  Devin Dawson, Jacob Robert Durrett, Austin Taylor Smith

TECHNIQUES TO HEAR AND TRY:

  • Use a lyric “measuring stick” to express emotion.
  • Fresh rhymes are happening in all mainstream genres.
  • Create a contemporary melody using phrase patterns.
  • Make your hook stand out with a rhythmic melody line.